Reviews for Rainbow Falls
scissor sex chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
I found you through the fictionpress search engine. xD. As you can see, my pen name also contains the word "Voodoo" and I was (egotistically?) searching for myself.
Maybe you should take the "A friend lived because of the poem" out of the description. It 'prejudiced' me.
The rhymes, and the story, are both cute. I would suggest work on the rhythm, however. It doesn't sound good when you read it.
Kris 56 chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
Wow, I really like this one! It's really neat. (It kept someone alive?) That's really neat! This has some wonderful imagry and I really enjoyed reading it!