Reviews for Your Pain
snow in the twilight chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
God I love your Writings! Keep writing

Myztikal
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
This has a kind of Evanescence feel to it which I really like but it's really original as well. Beautiful ending! QueenVixta
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
a great song
with lots of potential.
Trinity Joselyn Carter chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
wow... sounds evanescence-esque great work!
living-in-death chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
this is a good song, its so good.. there is no words for it. I feel like that a lot some ppl should just suffer for putting us threw so much pain. good job
living in death
Animagess chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
Some of the lines are a little melodramatic and awkward at times, and I'd get rid of the 'Chorus" bits unless you're putting it in the song section. There are some good lines that work, and the poem just needs a little bit more polish. Overall, not bad! Keep it up.