Reviews for Bastet: Demon in Modern Times |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is coming along great so far I just wanted to point out that, in places, when you meant to say: were, you spelt it as: where. I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Love your !UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yum. I ove bento boxes, especially when they have tempura or taro in them! Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A flawless fusion of good humor, and realistic romance, with enough creativity to make it more than enjoyable. Reading each new chapter is a privelage I don't take for granted. |
![]() ![]() Hi. I really love your story, the first chapter could use some work, particularly in the beginning. but every chapter after is excellant! I really love this story and i'm so focused on it that no other story is good enough so you have to hurry up and update soon!PLease!. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you know how hard I laughed when i realized that they were talking about the candy neclace? I practicaly died! I've probubly said this before, but I'll say it again anyway. You have matured so much as a writer since you began this story. It just keeps getting better. The humor is more advanced. I mean, the candy neclace thing was clasic! And the demons are becoming more and more distinct, seperated from human culture. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() This is interesting, very interesting indeed. Keep on updating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simply luverly! Do continue. R at least send me some info, don't leave such a funny story hanging this way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *grins and gives a thumbs up* AWESOME STORY! I LOVE IT! heh. very funny and entertaining I can't wait to read more! Please hurry! Ja! |
![]() ![]() ![]() science and sorcery...you wouldn't happen to be a gargoyles fan would you? You write aunt T very well. I also love how you give baz such deep thoughts then have her summ it up with "breading sucks hairy..." it's a wonderful style. and oh my...it's demon titanic. he said "nucking futs"! update soon! |
![]() ![]() lol funny gonna read chapter 2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love harry harrison!i thought it was terrible that at the end of make room!make room! the world didnt end, it seemed worse that everything kept going, and getting more worse and worse :(oh well, yay you updated!keep it up x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter. Thundercats. Hehehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's 9 in the morning and i'm stuck in school as i read this and i can't help agreing with Baz, heaven is a bed! i wanna be back in bed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao, love this story |