|Reviews for A Spring Storm|
| Ian Kline chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Wow, this is really great. It does give me great pleasure reading it. I will look into your other works. Truly quite good. Thanks for reviewing my poem.
| DrunkenMonkeyKing chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Another nice one, with a couple of lines that really get you thinking. I especially liked:
But is it head or heart that thinks?
Still blowing me away, my friend. You knock me down when it comes to poetry.
| Willow Elandria chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
very good, i love the feeling of building tension like the beginning of a storm. nice rhyming and imagery. "but is it head or heart that thinks?" is an interesting line.
a few little things: the repetition of "bitter" in line two, and i think you meant "on" intead of "and" in line seven.