Reviews for Kiss of Roses
Lisa Monroe chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
oh god that's beautiful!
"How easily love withers and dies"
PERFECT way to make a transition from the petals to the thorns...wow...move over robert frost
invalid id chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
I love the use of roses. Roses just can mean so much in writing. It's got a rosey feel to it, sweet, yet painful...this one was so vivid and real to me, I totally liked it.
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
I love writing about roses too, they have popped up in many of my works as you probably know.
Keep writing and good luck
Nine Iron
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Good juxtaposition of happiness with suffering. I enjoy how you again take roses and give them a different meaning. At times this piece seems a little harsh or choppy, but these are few and far between. In any case I liked it and I think you did very, very well. Well done!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
2 sides to everything. a happy and deadly. well portrayed.
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Very good description and portrays your emotion and feelings very well indeed. Your poetry often puts a smile on my face, and this one did, too.