Reviews for War
nesy chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
I read this poem a few months ago but I forgot to review. Well, I'm reviewing now. That was a really great poem, I loved it, the world would be much better if more people thought like you.
the lorax is coming chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
that was a kick-ass poem...loved the ending! go anti-bush people
De2nis chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
I'm apprecaite someone who can right in such a calm and intelligent manner as yourself, however, this poem had alot of overly done hyperboles, and not to mention there was no mention of Saddam's own tyranny and the people he killed, which should be mention in any anti-war argument as it is the main pro-war argument. But most importantly I think you should note we never walked away without a care, we have spent almost a year trying to rebuild and improve Iraq, and have lost hundreds of troops and millions of dollars doing so.
IHavePizza chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Nice rhyme scheme. The messgae is a little bit over done but, hey, if that's what you believe, write about it.
theoneyouknow chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
wow really good, flows great, hmm makes me wish i could rhyme cuz i cant *smile* awesome