Reviews for Delusions
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
exquisite.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
Being ignored is a worse feeling of an all out war or fight...you convey this turmoil well...
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
awesome poem. love the feelings in it.
Leo chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
You got skill once again bringin down the house! You shouldnt be alone and i know you not gonna be they aint no way someone with a soul like yours doesnt have a mate!
Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
It's really good. It reminds me of something that happened to me recently. I hate feeling ignored. It's one of the worst feelings. Congrats on another good poem...
MartinLundberg chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
i was sold on the spot with this one. my favorite part was the end. keep up the good work. gotta go...
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
hm...a sad poem to which i can sort of relate...i loved the line "and confusion still haunts me"...thanks for sharing and happy writing!