|Reviews for Reviewers|
| HestiaAbnegation11 chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
| echogirlcapri chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I agree with you! Though I always feel that I don't have enough reviews ... oh well, I loved this1 IT JUST MADE MY DAY!
| Serenity's Human chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
some hate my writeing (this should be writing)
That a side:
Really love 'I shall always
forever' and then at the end also repeated (I think this is a lovely ending and hence because you have added something after the first set I would think about removing the first one).
Things I would think to remove/edit:
the fourth line - skills (reads nicer without it to me).
Sixth - 'but' is not really needed.
I am a bit confused with 'i think nothing' as it leads into 'one quote'.
11th - shall love what? the one quote? Which quote?
Repeated 'no matter the flamer' and 'no matter the flamers'
Overall thought: I really loved how you make it clear in this poem that no matter what you will keep working on writing. That those who review are in your thoughts as you write for them. However I am left with the fact, do you take reviews that can help you in improving or just those who like what you do? Nice little question that is left.
| nine iron chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
All your work so far has a juvenile sort of on the desk scribble feel. I think go with it, works really well for you.