Reviews for Voices
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Great job!
recreated chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
OMG! that was so good! The words just flow together so great and the finished product is brilliant! fabulous!
SilverMoonlitPath chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
now one big question for you: how did you know what was in my head?
AngelaiR chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
briliant peice of work, just awesome, and I loved it!:D well done! I love the feelings in this poem and the meaning of it..
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Very abstract and a little confusing, but i guess that's expected? I think you know what you're doing though. An interesting read.
peachy-666 chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Very nice. Definitely makes it sound like insanity...Love it. Keep up the good work.
beve chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
u know what,this is just weird...
but good!
i didnt get it at first...sorry,not that big a fan of poems..but after i bothered getting the words registered into my brain(i know im slow),it actually made sense.(this is the part of me speaking with my head below the clouds).
u know what u should do?a poem...with...i forgot what i wanted to ?its ok...but it'd be cool to read about someone leaving u and u think u've gotten over it but thats really in mind and the rest of ur feelings that u think have gotten over it hasnt and actually its locked in the very bottom of the heart in a room filled with shadows and cobwebs. scaring 'd be just too...'above the clouds' most of the time to come down to earth and write 'evil' stuff
Princess White Turtle chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Your really good in talking to yourself do you? This is nice and a good symbolism. Keep on writing.