Great job!

OMG! that was so good! The words just flow together so great and the finished product is brilliant! fabulous!

now one big question for you: how did you know what was in my head?

briliant peice of work, just awesome, and I loved it!:D well done! I love the feelings in this poem and the meaning of it..

Very abstract and a little confusing, but i guess that's expected? I think you know what you're doing though. An interesting read.

Very nice. Definitely makes it sound like insanity...Love it. Keep up the good work.

u know what,this is just weird...
but good!
i didnt get it at first...sorry,not that big a fan of poems..but after i bothered getting the words registered into my brain(i know im slow),it actually made sense.(this is the part of me speaking with my head below the clouds).
u know what u should do?a poem...with...i forgot what i wanted to ?its ok...but it'd be cool to read about someone leaving u and u think u've gotten over it but thats really in mind and the rest of ur feelings that u think have gotten over it hasnt and actually its locked in the very bottom of the heart in a room filled with shadows and cobwebs.
...im scaring 'd be just too...'above the clouds' most of the time to come down to earth and write 'evil' stuff

Your really good in talking to yourself do you? This is nice and a good symbolism. Keep on writing.