Reviews for So Flawed
Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
very very powerful. a poem full of meaning and intellect and just pure power. well done :)
vturnip chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
I too am so tired of death and war. And it does feel like what the people say doesn't count. Thanks for the poem.
De2nis chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
I had to read this twice before I got the message, but I understand it now. There is alot of argument crammed in this poem and I must say this poem is, though I have read better, quite powerful. If I had to change one thing though it would be making the real message alittle less subtle.
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
It's a very nice poem, but I'm having a little trouble figuring out what your position is. But that also makes it very interesting in itself and very open minded, kind of. I like it!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
ah i hate policitcs! but i like the poem.
Linnet chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
I like this a lot-though I'm a little unclear on your views-are you for the war or against it?
-Linnet