Reviews for Reaching Out
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
Great use of imagery, short but still very understandable. I really like it, becuase it is so simple but full of meaning.
Aquis-S chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Your poems are so simple at times and yet they convay so much. I like the imagrey of a glass waterfall. keep writing
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
oh that leaves a lot to the imagination. i can so picture this now!
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
i like it! great imagery! the reason that you are not on my lists is because my lists are full and i haven't deleted it yet, otherwise you would be! it's 1 am here...lol...and i'm about 18...any more questions? lol! great poem! thanks for the reviews!
Kaxanthedragon chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
True, true. But you can always take a jack-hammer... Just kidding! _
-Red
lisaslife chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Its pretty, but I don't understand.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
reely short and im not sure i get anything from it. can u explain?
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Multi- faceted. At least, that's what i think. Very good imagery created.
flyinfrogg chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
that has a lot of meaning for such a short poem.
Hail the Warrior chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Short and Simple. It's nice.
Thanks for reviewing all of my tankas.
As for advice on how to write one, think of something original and then think abstractly around it to describe the feeling or what it looks like.
HtW
twilightwriter07 chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Thought provoking here...I like it. _
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Makes you really think...perhaps the water you thought had movement was just a vision...could relate to many topics. The illusion of a relationship going forward, a career...a friendship. When you are about to jump in and be whisked away, you reach to feel the water first and find it was just glass all along...sad. Nice work, smart...