Reviews for You Broke It
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
So true! Great poem
Crimson-Fantasy chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
it true sometimes you have got to tuff through things very nice poem true meaning full and well writen that is the way to do it for sure i love your word choice to small word work well in this poem makes it feel like you have broken it down again and agin some many times that this is how it turned out cool
CherryK chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
I like this, its got good rythm and rhyme, shame on the person who broke the promise first!
Thanx for reviewing my stuff, I've got some more up if you want to check it out :P
oohaysemag2001 chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
Great poem and you know what you're right you have to stay strong.
Someone special will come along.
poem critic
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
wow, can totally relate. you're very good at this, you know. its very easy to relate to your poetry. great job, as always.
Nii-shii chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
Awsome I like this poem reminds me of something I am going through...Thanks for your review on my story and keep up the good work
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Yup. That's my motto in life. If you unjustly hurt someone for no reason at all, then everything you do will come back to bite you in the butt ten-fold. I liked how you summed that up in the end where you said :
I have to stay strong
It was you who broke first
So you can't blame me this time
Your pain shall be the worst-

Some call that Karma, but I call it "that's what you get hahahaha."
Anyway, rambling aside I loved it. Beautifully written. Keep writing such heart touching poems.
FS signing out as a fan 4 life. TTFN.
LiL Angel with Wings chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Wow, I can relate. I know what it feels like to have someone close or maybe even one you love break a promise. It hurts. Good Job!
LiL Angel with Wings
~Dreamer to Fly~
Matt Alan chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Wow...Leo, this is one of the few poems I've actually read that words truly fail to describe the magnitude this poem has on the heart.
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Seems like a spell to enact revenge!
AllThatMatters chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Cool poem. I sense revenge.
PS please reveiw us back, thanks.