Reviews for What went wrong?
OfDaysGoneBy chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
great poem. i can really relate to it. keep writing...oh, and thanks for reviewing my poem_
Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Good poem here. Did you know that your sister Florence is the best friend that I've ever had in my life? I like the last two lines:
"Still I must just carry on
Always trying to be strong."
Nice 'twist'.