Reviews for The Mind Game
Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 333 chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
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Hm! Eloquence...
-Rachel
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
I noticed you write a lot of essays, I'll read em smoetime I pwomise _ just thought I'd check out one of your poems. This one's simply and bluntly put, and that's not a bad thing since it's a good theme you are attempting to portray here. Keep on writing boy!
Jenna xx
Tom Madden chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
really great! school gossip sux.
katmonkey chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Original. Nice poem : )
*lime-girl*
Wrathful Diana chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Quite true, very well written like the rest of your poems. Try writing a fiction, that would be cool
Nymph
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
I swear I reviewed this already, o well, it's a saddening poem, and it's very good.
Eternal Aeris chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
*sigh* I wanna be able to write poems like you...all my poems are like..."Oh, I love you, but you don't love me back so I'm gonna go out with this person! Oh wait...you DO like me? Sh**, why didn't you tell me?"
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
The line: "No matter what I do or say,
What I did is there." seems really important to me. It definately made me think because I had a huge bout of this 2 years ago for ages ... or something like that. Anyhow, it really does sum up exactly how you feel in that situation. My theory is to hide under a rock or two.
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Saddening... well done...
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
very interesting ;) nice work!
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
'rumors spread like wild fire...' Love that line. the poem just makes me think: "It's not fair! This is too good!" Sorry- hopefully, u know what i'm trying to say: well done. As per usual. ; )
vanburen chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
You think such deep thoughts for your age! That's what you get for being so smart, lol. It's sad how humans get such pleasure out of hurting others. It's like we are all constantly being consumed by our own jealousy. What can any one of us do to make it better, if anything at all? Keep going, you do stream of consciousness writing well.
TaschaBear chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Hey jake...
its me...tascha...am I that she? And yes i know...I'm not mad at the fact that you like you know who but the only reason why i am mad at you is because you couldn't confront me about it...you were to scared...
Breaking Heart chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
heyhey.
to this i can relate...sorta.
it is like a fuzzie picture of one's self-discoverie.
i like.
your irish lover