What a fantastic poem! I chuckled a bit, it was macabre and creepy and downright well-written! The language you use is very poignant _ (Oh, and thank you for reviewing my poem!)

I like it...it reminds me of Edgar Allen Poes poem, The Raven.

Hehe! Funny, Im so Weird This Makes Me Laugh! It's Nice To Read A Crazy Piece Of Writing Once In A While, You Get Bored Of The Serious Stuff. Nice One! :)