Reviews for Invisible Love
crybabekrizz chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
loneliness.. invisible love. this is so sad yet so tru- for me. i just lurv this poem. esp. the 'internal test' part. continue typin~ i just can't wait!
Lova Boy chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
Ow... so true. I love it, it's amazing! you are truly gifted in finding the right words! by the way, I am 12 years old.
Brian A.S.
evilvsgood chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
such a nice poem.. i could relate to it, too.
invalid id chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Hmm another theme of invisibility, I like're just amazing at conveying and describing. I can't find any other way to put it. You're an incredibly talented writer.
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Very good, theme doesn't seem to be needed here - which is all good and well because there doesn't seem to be one. Good rhyming, another masterful piece of poetry. Keep it up.
SterbendesFeuer chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
I like it, espically your word choice. It adds a nice tone to it. I like the rhyme scheme also. RR my work sometime? Thanks.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
hum gots a theme going on here? i like it though!