Reviews for Transparent Dreams
forgottenmoon831 chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
This poem is so true, both the dream and the reality. I like the title of this one, I've never thought of dreams being transparent, but now that I've read this, it's a perfect adjective for it!
invalid id chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
I so imagined that, good job!
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Hmm... vivid pictures have been placed into my mind, and your skill has been defined; extraordinary! Good one.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
ah nice poem! i love dreams, but hate when the good ones dont come through... oops i mean true! ;) silly me :P (new poem posted :) sorry. had to say...)
IHavePizza chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Wow! Amazing and vivid imagary!