Reviews for Passing Trains
forgottenmoon831 chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
*sigh* I don't know what to say, you're just one of the greatest poets on this website!
invalid id chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Oh the feeling of being alone and ignored by the passing masses...so good...I felt alone as I read it...you can't write bad at all.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
A very melancholic piece, very sentimental and powerful in its own unique way. Good work my friend.
-MJC
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
I see the trains as maybe boyfriends or simply friends, of whom she just cannot seem to hold onto. Great emotion. Lives up to your high standards - well done!
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Hello again. Nice feeling here, you get the picture of the subject standing on a rural english train station, the odd train emptying around her. She is wrapped up warm and waiting.
Love it
Keep writing and we shall all keep reviewing
Nine Iron
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
ah i like! im so adding it to favs! its so sad and well done! and thanks for clearing up the matt/matthew whole confusion thing :P he is an awesome writer :P him and darkpaladin13 had u on favs so i figured might as well check out ur works since it must be good :P