Reviews for Tear a Rose Petal
lisaslife chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
its short, but deep and immensly sad.
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Lisa
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
huim, makes me wanna go out find a rose petal and try :P sadly its raining and raining and raining here so im not going out until the last possible second
End Of The Innocence chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Painful closure...
I suppose ending a relationship is never painless.
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Short and sweet. I like it! :-)
apen-hjerte chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
This is great!
It leaves enough to the imagination to be interesting, but is not so vague as to be thoughtless.
Kaxanthedragon chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
You have such simple poems, but they have such impact. Like a grain of sand in 100 m.p.h. winds.
-Red
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
wow... great poem, it seems to me that you are upset about something. maybe not, but i sense some anger. anyway, wonderful work, keep it up!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Your killing me with this one...oh, how delicate it is! I like the description of it being a "tissue," something still living, ouch, how it hurts...this closure I feel is painful.