|Reviews for Free|
| Thamian chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
As I said elsewhere I like this poem.
Several things which I particularly like include:
The way that you use very heavy (but not overly so) repetition to really hammer home the speaker's desire to be free.
The way that the final stanza really ties up all of the loose ends I like as it means that the poem manages to end on an upwards note rather than the downwards one expressed near the start of the poem.
The only slight problem I have with this poem is the quite depressing tone near the beginning, but otherwise good.
| Seashah chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
I really like it. The both hating and loving the days between really made allot of sense to me. It is one of the few poems that I've read that I truly understand and relate to. And it's beautiful. You should write even more stuff like this.