|Reviews for The Contract|
| In Silver Lake Island chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
This seems like a story that will build and never let the reader disconnect from the tale with the deep suspense. The foreboding in this first chapter already allows the story it's own voice if you will. I like that it is in first person, it brings me in a close relationship with the main character, Katlyn.
| Dreams14 chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
I have to say that by simply reading this first section I was completely engaged, I wish I could read more of it.
| Scardusk chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Hi, it's a shame you had to take this down. I remember reading this years ago, when I was a teenager and I was so excited, too, when I found you had written a sequal!
I completely understand why you took it down and I wish you luck in publishing. I don't have the time to follow you to livejournal, but I have favourited this in the hope that one day it will be updated with a link to your book on amazon or something.
good luck xxx
| darknessdragon2213 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
This story and its sequel have got to be one of the more morbid-laced romance stories I’ve ever read. And I LOVE IT! Lure is also such a possessive demon hottie 3 Although I can’t remember many of the major details from the story even after all these years the morbid scene of Lure carving a bloody smiley face on Kat’s stomach with a knife still remains. It is ironic how, if I remember correctly, it lead to Kat being sent to the mental asylum in the end only to be killed being suffocated by a pillow. I love how you always manage to make these quick transitions in your story while sprinkling surprise twists at every turn. Any how I’d be lying if Lure’s perverted and suggestive nature wasn’t one of the major things that lured me into the story. Especially that scene where Kat felt him up through the blanket or was it the other way around? Either way it was hot. The development of their romance was also not rushed at all and was very gradual. I loved how Lure didn’t just fall in love with Kat and you kept his demonic nature intact while furthering his development. Hence the countless betrayals, but you always manage to make him come back to her in a heart wrenching way 3 I also remember the ending to be a little too supernatural, but the action scene with them uniting together and Lure not dying (Thank god you didn’t kill him off! I would’ve cried buckets!) definitely received two thumbs-up from me. Even though these stories are no longer on FictionPress this was definitely my most memorable story from this site despite the span of seven years. Thank you for such a great read!
| Binkybaby chapter 15 . 5/21/2011
Okay no offence but I like this but like I am totally confused. why are your chapters so short? And I read some of the short ones so far and they aren't making no sense.
| toto chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
we need more :)
| S-Neo chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Oh my. I was told by a friend to read this (and she never reads so this coming from her must mean that your story was the bomb. However, when she found your page, she was really shocked that you removed everything, but after seeing why, she accepted your decision for what it was.) I've read this little snippet of your story and it is quite interesting. I find it a shame that your originals works have been stolen under your nose. I made this account just yesterday, but I've known about fictionpress for a few months now, so I'm no stranger. Well, I too will be writing stories soon (noobs are delayed a two day waiting period, which mind you, blows) but I think I will do as you did: Post a good teaser a story (like 5 chapters) and leave it hanging.
I know that publishing a real novel is expensive (unless you sign to a company and send out your manuscripts to editors) but perhaps that's what you should try to do. You're really talented, and I know that your imagination is going to take you many places !
| InkWitch chapter 29 . 11/20/2010
I hate you.
Well not really. But you rock and now i have to join another site to read your awesome story.
Now do you see why i hate you?
You are seriously mean. But... this story is tugging at me. and Lure is TOO MUCH OF AN AWESOME CHARACTER for me not to read this.
| InkWitch chapter 2 . 11/20/2010
this sounds like a story to devour x)
M Lure sounds so... yummy :d I could lick him up like chocolate... okay. weird thought. xP
I love your writing. You have a way of showing exactly what's happening and I can also tell exactly what Katlyn is thinking and feeling just by reading how she reacts to things. I love her character.
But I completely dislike the character Amanda. She seems so... bland and boring and too... emphasized? I don't know. She seems like a pretty useless character to me.
I'm looking forward to the next chapters xD
| sherbetsi chapter 29 . 11/19/2010
Yay! Already on TWA. This is a blessing i am really looking forward to :D
| We Used To Wait chapter 29 . 11/18/2010
Maybe it's just me... but I totally failed at this TWA 'signing up' process. I shall try again later.
| dimethylmercury chapter 29 . 11/18/2010
Can I say *FLAILFLAILFLAIL*.
This has made my day. Seriously. (:
| iammisspedia chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
and I was hoping to read this but it's gone.
| JaseyxRae chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
I love you work so much. How you wrote so grippingly and well when you were THIRTEEN will always amaze me. I absolutely loved this story, it was my first FictionPress story and is what lured me to FictionPress at all in the first place. The quality, intensity, and creativity of your writing is just... amazing.
I hope SO badly that someday you will repost these stories, I know plagarism is devestating, and I respect your decision. But I selfishly hope that someday you just... put them back up! :( Or put them on another site your more comfortable with? Perhaps a livejournal with privacy settings? I doubt it highly, but if you ever feel like emailing me your stories so i can read them I'd PM my address to you and I'd love you even more than I do now, haha! (I would never plagarize. But I don't really think you'd ever email them to anyone anyway. Just trying anything to read your work again...)
And if you ever get published, which you WILL if you ever try to because your writing is beyond amazing, I really can't accurately describe it with words, then PLEASE tell us on FictionPress. I'd rush out and buy 20 copies and force everyone I know to read them (and keep like ten for myself, ha), because everyone deserves to read your absolutely amazing writing! I'm really not kidding, I would buy it for sure and turn all my friends into major fans as well!
PLEASE RECONSIDER. Another site? Repost them? Sell them? ANYTHING! Please!
| Sara Ivy Wolf chapter 29 . 3/30/2010
umm im a little confused about the plot...um im not saying its bad or anything i think its really good but i realy dont understand the plot of the story