Reviews for Men See Me
Dumon chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
THIS IS NOT POETRY! THIS IS A POEM ABOUT JUDGING OTHERS WHEN YOU HAVE NOT EVEN PASSED JUDGMENT ON YOURSELF! I aplogize if this sounds critical, but it is. The smae thing happens to me but I don't write a "I'm sorry to write this" pathetic whining poem about it. really your other poems do well.
toro chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Yes, I can totally relate to this. I hate it when guys decide its appropriate to shout comments at you in the streets. Great work.
militantfeminist chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
I like the way you're venting anger without yelling and screaming, its all true. Fabulous work as usual.
Rissa
vturnip chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Claps hands. I hate when guys are too pushy! Love the attitude in this one.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
wow, im like complete opposite. no one ever looks at me... nice poem tho, makes me feel as if they do look at me. really captures your feelings nicly.
Rose of Darkness 666 chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Some guys are just plain rude. Seriously this one time I was at a public pool and...nevermind. Anyway I like this poem too. You're a great writer.