|Reviews for The Man Who Cried Vampire|
| slave to the voices chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
You have a great, fresh idea for a worn out vampire topic. However, I think it would have been better if you added more description. Also, I'm pretty sure the National Enquirer can sue you for slander because you said that they print lies (you might want to think of a fictional name for the tabloid). Anyway, keep working and writing.
PS. If you have time, check out my WRITING CHALLENGE. I'm interested to see what you can do with it.
| Love and Shadow chapter 1 . 5/15/2004