Reviews for Haiku
Twilit Exaggerance chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
well wrote. I can never write haiku's.
Kethry Jonas chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
is it jelousy? is it hurt? it feels like a great loss to you. who is she? although its a haiku, the end feels like it needs another line.
'I dont understand how?' but i like it. D
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
I think it would look better if it was spaced between the sections. If I wrote it like this I would write it 5-7-5-7-5... but this is done in the 5-7-5-5-7-5... format, not saying it is wrong, just I would have spaces if I did it the second way so it was 5-7-5 5-7-5...
Keep writing, it takes talent to write within restraints.