Reviews for I'm Giving You Another Chance
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
hm...i sort of can relate to this one...and i loved the thought and effort that you put into this poem, however i noticed that all your poems rhyme...rhyming is satisfactory but doesn't have to be done all the time to make a sufficient, heartfelt poem...that's my opinion anyway but it's your decision...thanks for sharing and keep writing!
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
*first review dance* This is so sad and I can totally relate because I've been here. But enough of me. This is fantastic. YOu have a unique style that really captures the reader. I like it. Just remember, you don't have to rhyme all the time. Just a thought. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reviewing.
Hawke