Reviews for In the Darkness with a Song
Stuffblah chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
OMG. This is outstanding! I literally can't belivie you wrote this, it has so much emotion in every line. :)

Great job!
holadios chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
OH my gosh! I love this poem! Love it Love it Love it! PS...LOVE IT!
Arkash chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
This is an incredible poem.

I like the meaning and flow, and the meter is good.

Great Job!

P.S. You're right, this poem has similar cadence as mine.
Laineniel chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
That was amazing! I really like constant rhyme and the way the lines flow together. Well done!
P.S. Thanks for the review!
Edraith chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Wonderful. Reminds me of Tolkien, or the epics of ancient Celtic or anglo-Saxon literature (could as well be the Aeneid, I guess ;-) ). You manage to evoke that fantastuc, epic atmosphere really well, through your choice of words as well as the rhymes and repetitions. I like the way you switch from "There was a man" to the solution "I am the man" in the end, that is very effective. My favourite part is "There was a man who stood all alone,
Who split the silence with a groan,
Who groaned in saddest, soulful tone."
That's just so vivid, so expressive.
Good job.
sifer chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
you write poetry, i do to. this is realy good ,it touches my heart.i like it i think its great,bravo.
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Hey, thanks for the review! I don't see why ppl haven't reviewed this one yet... It was amazing how you got everything to rhyme like that, but it still moved with the idea of a story... Wonderful ideas, conveyed loneliness and a tale of heroics that have since died.. reminds me a little of "a wrinkle in time" by l'engle... Great job, write on!