|Reviews for Sweet Death|
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
wow deep and sad. i love the raw emotion in this, and the flow. i hardly see rhyme used properly. so props for that. and to clarify i meant "could feel the emotion" in "Chronically dumped" (hahah...i wasn't thinking straight)
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
.com has over 8,0 tests. some are pretty crude, but some are a blast, of course, i'm listed as antylyzyk. it's great realizing that i belong in an entirely different geologic strata (Antylyzoic) as the rest of the humans that have taken okcupid's stupid test! enjoy! m.
| Debbirooni chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
WOW! That was like a perfect poem! I really love that one... but it's so sad! :(
I dunno what to say really, no criticisms, cause it seemed almost perfect... Almost, meaning you had 2 typos... fix that, and it'll be perfect! _~
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
very nice poem! well done.
| KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
"I look to were
You once were"
Did you mean 'I look to WHERE' you once were'? Because if you did then that answers alot (don't worry, I really need to spell check my own stuff P ) But this poem was good... I could see images in my head.
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Omg wow... just wow... **tear**
| ApplesCM chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Sad, and very touching. I really like this one! Great job!