Reviews for Mommy
yWrite chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
You do a very convincing job at writing from a young child's point of view.
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
I can hear the child talking throughout the whole poem. Great. It's sad when a child thinks they are responsable for their parent's death. The two movies, Guess Who and the older version Guess Who's Coming to Dinner (I like this better) are along your theme.
Serene Waters chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
Aw... That's sad. You did a good job at keeping to the child-like narative. I have a couple close friends who's parents are different races. I think it's a beautiful thing. I believe it's the best of both worlds honestly.
~Serene Waters
the insane floo pot chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
*hugs* it's just so sad! It still amazes me that racism even exists today, in the 21st century no less! I mean it's simply unbelievable really isn't it *sighs* people will never learn!
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
Oh gosh, that broke my heart. So sad. so sweet. aw.
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
That's such a sad poem, and it hits close to home cause my Mom just died, but it's an excellent poem! I love your work!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
well written poem. seriously ;)
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
Aww that's so sad... The pain... I'm able to feel it...
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Aww that's so sad... racism sux. And i don't think it's THAT bad of a word.