Reviews for Until That Day
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
there's nothing serious, for everything ends,-

trite justifying in defying love,

leaves nothing of hot passion for soul's lost,

in fierce intensity of red heart's lust,

searing quick electric rends lives in two,

leaving blackened wreckage of life's proud straight,

as forces elementary discharge,

energies destructive in their crossing,

for only love can dissipate love's lust,-

and, only heart can take love's lightning strikes.
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
thats good
i hope its not true.
sheZadey chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
woah. that was deep and serious. i like the twist. again i dont think you need an authors note. it was a great poem
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
I liked it a lot. how could u not like it? The theme was good, the message was good, and I like the simple way u say things.
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Wow! That was powerful! But it was good, you have nothing to worry about!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
heh i like it!
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
Hmm it's not your best, but not really bad either. Keep it up.
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Wow. I like it. A bit sad. :-\ but its really good. Great job!