Reviews for No Feeding
Strider Hunter chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
It is an odd story, but I can see the irony in it. Good job with the writing, keep it up. Who would have known that sheep could be carnivorous?
warnthepenguins chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Strange. Killer sheep are certainly a source of much humor-although I think this needs to capture a lot more of the absurdity of the judge's verdict.

Also, while you follow the rules for quote marks during long speeches, it comes off strangely. I'd suggest /not/ putting the sheep's blattings on separate lines, even though that's the convention outside of speeches.
bfmusashi chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
this is odd, but in a good, drugged-up-on-a-sugar-high kind of way. :) i loved how you kept describing certain things in this piece as "sheep-like" or "judge-like." you stayed consistant with that throughout the entire piece, which gives it a nice voice. fun stuff.
a-person-01 chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Wow! That was cool. I liked it. You're right, it is a bit odd (more than a bit). But sometimes that's what makes stories good. And this one really really is. Great job!
Raven Oghma chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
"sheep-sized noses trills"
Nostrils, love... Nostrils.
Otherwise, quite an amusing story, while very strange. Lovely job.
-Raven Oghma
hamsta-boi chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
JuMpY and very weird. But in a good way. Well done for a funny short fic.
Love and Shadow chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
what in the world? i have a question for you. WHY IS IT IN THE HORROR SECTION?ITS HUMOR NOT HORROR! ARE YOU BLIND? AND WHATS WITH THE SHEEP-COLORED SHEEP AND THE SHEEP-COLORED EYES AND THE SHEEP-COLORED COAT OF THE SHEEP?
slave to the voices chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
A bit odd? NO, very odd, but kinda funny. I like the way you made the general descriptions (sheep-colored and judge-like). Cute story, keep writing.
**Slave**
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