Reviews for Suicide
Solstice Yvonne chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
Oh okay i see you aren't suicidal. believe a suicidal AIN'T WHAT ITS LIKE!WE DON'T THINK ILL THOUGHTS WE JUST WANT TO END THE FUCKING PAIN. thank you for letting me critique you and i hope you rot in heaven.
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
You've captured it well. Suicide...
Nienyalie chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Simple and empassioned. Good job.
VolleyBCutiePie chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Very powerful yet simple. I liked it when you said 'Crimson Fountains Flow'. Keep writing!
Rachel
Time To Change chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
loved it. you managed to get the point across even though you dont have much room in a haiku. well done
ict
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
Oh I like this one, now Im going to say something very Sean like, it was oddly, arousing! Thats was the Sean moment! That is enough!
dietcoke chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
Your worded it really well. It gets the point across.
spiritfire chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
O! Dark. Me like. Loved really...it all! The sentences just all fit together so nicely. Great job.
P.S. Sorry I was too lazy to sign in. You can slap me for it later. :: runs away before said slapping can occur ::
shinco chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
Hey! I got that completely! Very cool, though deadly! _ Cool one! Keep up the good work! _
Heiro Takahashi chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
short but graphic...
Morbid-Sin chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Very well written. Simple and short, but you chose the words well and put your point across.