Reviews for I'm Only For You
James Li chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
it good but i think the 2nd to the last line is off
Britani. G. Simone chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
Hmm, not so sure about this poem. Feels a bit rushed and the lines don't scan so well. It has a good undertone but I'm not sure if it works. Don' tkae this as a flame cos I like the rest of your work, this poem is just a bit disjointed...