Reviews for Whore Child
Trinka chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
*cries* that's sad and so good, and I think that there're a lot of people who are mistaken for what they look like and/or what they seem to be and they aren't...*sigh*
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
this so beautifully written, and it's so sad. you wrote this in just the right way.
keep writing-
til-iburnout
eyluvmusic chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
Wow... I like it a lot. You've brought out the emotions of the girl, and what she's going through. Plus you make rhyming seem so easy.
Well Done :)
The Killer Queen chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
Perfect flow, perfect structure, perfect rhyming. The lest forced-sounding poem I have read in a long time. Excellent job.