Reviews for A glimpse of you
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/26/2004
you bring out
feelings with style.
another well-written piece.
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
aw. I really liked this. It shows the reader that u liss the person but ur willing to let go. I just wish other people could learn to be that way.
Leo chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
this is killa its sad and so god you got mad skills! I know how it feels too...I love it good job!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
i liked this poem...even though it wasn't your strongest...for example, instead of saying "after years of being away", you may want to play with hyperbole or something; perhaps like "after being centuries/light years away...just some cc which i hope helps alot...thanks for sharing though and happy writing!
DJ Youmans chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
This peom was great! I like it alot
MartinLundberg chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
Well... It’s not your best but still a good poem. It happened a couple of times for me too. I liked the part that you did’nt quite knew if he saw u and remembered you. Stuff like that makes the mind wonder….. ;-) C ya