Reviews for Serenade
kisses chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
i love it. truly. im gonna check out more of your stuff, and i like this idea for your novella too. i also like, "and by morning i fade away"
keep writting
Tara
SilverAndFlames chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
Whoa!
I wish I could right something like that... It's so brilliant well done!
BlackLilyArcher chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
o nice. i lyk da word choices
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
Um, i like the jesus thing. It sounds melancholy somehow. You've used some phrases i haven't read before. Nice.
my-vision chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
nice song. i like the "i-don't-care-what-anyone-thinks-about-me" thing. that's cool. self-confidence.
"Don't tell me nothing's wrong/I'm singing victory's song/And by morning/I fade away"
AllThatMatters chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
Interesting rhyming pattern, very unique and free. It's really out there but we like it. Our favorite line was 'an anthem to the night' because it reminds us of that song by story of the year, "Anthem of Our Dying Day." Please reveiw us back.
PS y do fools fall in love?