This was fantastic. It reminds me a bit of a narrative I wrote, "His Favourite Toy"... I almost want to put that to a poem because of this... it was an excellent metaphor. Great rhyming. Well done. I hope it wasn't based on a personal experience.

... once again i love your wording, check out some more of my stuff, I'm gonna keep looking at yours. ~*Keep writing*~

oh! That's so sad! You write so beautifully! i'm jealous of that. Oh... Can I keep you?

umm, my dear Romeo, although i love you (not in that way for all those reviwers that don't know me personally) THAT POEM REALLY SCARES ME! o.O (me raising my eyebrow)

Well... that's a good poem. Nice job. I'll read more of your stuff later I think. Could you review some of my stuff? (I hate begging for reviews, but I gotta do what I gotta do) Found this by looking through the reviews of RSS's poem about sanity and stuff. Nice job.

Very nice (wow, I really need to get out the thesarus)...but seriously, I liked it...I'm putting it on my faves.

is this about you? if yes then you poor soul, stay strong... this poem was cleverly done and i love it, thanks for the reviews, i know blood sense is a bit disjointed but hey, im disjointed! :) glad you like em! i love yours!

This happened to a good friend of mine, except for she's still in denial. I like this one especially, it's good!
~SRA

Ooh, I quite like this poem. Lovely writing. I particularly like the first and the last part. Nice imagery in the last one.

ouch...impacting.
very good.