|Reviews for Vocal Luminescence|
| Citanya chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
This is the best of yours I have read so far. The way you use the colours is lovely, and the way how song and time become symbols for something larger.
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Beautifully rendered and evocative.
You have style.
Gone to favourites.
I'd appreciate you thoughts on some of my work. I think you might like: Sunrise, Covet, Fairytale; well any in which you're interested. Those are some I particularly like. See what you think )
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Very good I like.
| alycia divine chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
I love your style, it's so free and without boundary. Beautiful.
| sheZadey chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
aah now i get it- lol. I had to read this a couple times to understand what the poem was about. its very complex and deep for its length. i like how you've divided things. it makes them stronger. usually length weakens things- so short and strong is waay better. : o)
| Sara Bickley chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
I love this! It creates a certain tough-but-melancholy mood, sort of like film noir (but in color ~_).
| booforever chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
It's ambiguous, but still has meaning.
I love the shift and the word choice. From the harsh words (burnt and chalked) you went to gentle (sparkle and shine). It shows you're actually thinking about what you write.
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
This is just beautiful...What a beautiful picture it paints but more than that, it gives such a power to the "you" in the poem...could be very romantic, although I'm not sure if you meant it in that way.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
very very very interesting.
| Turquoise Draka chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
ooh I can just see it
you paint a great picture with so few words. THat is a skill I haven't aquired yet. I like the idea of the stars-check out my poem
thanx for reviewing mine:)
| Kaxanthedragon chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
Interesting, but I find this one a bit confusing though...
| Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
It's a bit abstract, but quite beautiful...I like.