Another exciting chapter.

Ruckil is sicker than sick, he's hellspawn. one question: if the entities of the Triumvirate can manipulate spacetime, then why don't they just annihilate our universe rather than playing around?

Exciting chapter.

But Willart too seem to be only a pawn.

Characters should drive the plot, but maybe it will change later.

Interesting plot twist.

I wonder whether Ruckil is a part of the Triumvirate, or if he's only a pawn.

So when will Kirsha and Willar get together?

This is a good chapter to reveal Willart's past-clone/vatborn.

Good thing you included that the nanbot repair modules need to heal. It gives the story credibility.

Scary chapter with that Abomination Machine loose. The imagery is done well.

And a good cliff hanger ending.

I like the idea of rogue robots/machines. I'm using that in Book II of the 'Lords.." series.

Another interesting chapter.

I could use a Benefactor like that.

Good use of technology.

I would never have thought that Willart would give up control of his body.

That Abomination Machine is persistent.

Good chapter!

That was sick, sick, sick. Now I see what you meant about Ruckil. For sure, he's a sick bastard. My poor Wu Fang pales in comparison.

Good way to show the antagonist-so you have a good grip on the craft of writing. I mean: SHOW, DON'T TELL.

I'll read more later. *_*

P.S. I love when people speculate on my stories. I love it even more when they're wrong. the 7 worlds are not what you guessed, but later you may change your tune. You will be surprised.

Great chapter.

I enjoyed learning about the Theugic effect, I was wondering and refrained from speculations.

So Willart will become a hero. Good Job on this one! *_*

Another great chapter. Excellent usage of technology, again.

I like the way you blend the past and the future. The engineered Amfolk are fascinating, and the Confessors seem frightening. I'm sure you intended, that and it worked.

Good Job! *_*

Wow! This is awesome, the best chapter I've read so far.

I like the history, and you're already into picotechnology, even bypassed femto. I'd never thought I see anyone on this site dwell into the pico world.

Excellent job!

Ecxiting chapter, the Abomination Machine. I wonder if they'll be able to ditch the thing.

Look forward to the next chapter.

Villar Tonneich is a hard captain, but a man of multi talents.

You have interesting technology in here, especially the alteration of his brain by nanotech.

I like the cliff hanger ending.

Very interesting prologue. You've set this story in a harsh millieu, like a slacker needs to be injured to be reminded of his duties.

The artifact sounds mysterious enough to fascinate.

Good Job!

P.S. I'm also interested in nanotechnology. Have you read any of Eric Drexler's work?

OK, a good title, let's see what else you have.