Reviews for Muses Confuses
Terra Tigra chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
hehehe, very cute. I like the layout. There are some rhymes in there but they don't take over the poem itself. i like that.
The end is a little cheesy, though. Sorry ." And I don't suppose I'm one to talk but, well, yeah. Maybe if it was just done a little differently. I kind of cringed when i got there.
Otherwise, I like :)
Nice job.
Arrivederci!
-Terra-
Amora Elvenstar chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
::taps foot, shakes head, and sighs:: took you a little while didn't it? I luvs ya but sumtimes you are a little denser than me. j/k. Great job. I luv it. One of your best. Keep it up. And u are luv'd
Ciara Malloren chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Cool thought. The structure of this one is rather interesting, too. One note, in the second to last stanza, you have a period after "You're", I doubt you want that there.