very good, I like your poetry, thanks for R&R my stuff!

I like your simple, but powerful style. It makes the messege that is being told practically slap you in the face. I like the subtle rhyming too. It's not overpowering. I found I could really relate to this poem, and it made me smile in a sad way. (Which means it did its job of creating an emotion.) I really liked the lines "It's not that I think I own you/Or have a right to tell you how to live/But I wonder why you pick her/When I have everything to give." Those lines really hit me hard, and I think they are the most powerful in the whole poem. All in all, I really like this poem, especially the title. You always have to have a good title, and this one was perfect. Awesome write.

This was completely me last year and I still believe that I'm the perfect girl for this guy but (if you have read my poems) he lives in a different state now.

Wow... This is EXACTLY how I feel as you can tell by some of my poems. It sux that guys don't look at us for character anymore.

*Tears fill eyes* You hit that right on the dot. You're so right about that. You are prettier and you have so much more to offer than she ever will. Hmm, maybe that's why he stopped dating her...

Oh my gosh, this poem relates to me so much! But enough about me- I really loved this poem. I think that it realates to real life- really good!