|Reviews for To Fight or Fall|
| me chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Very interesting beginning...I'm looking forward to seeing how this one plays out. :)
| Purple Glasses chapter 19 . 9/27/2009
I'm favoriting this. It's hilarious and the two main characters are so well written! Cale and Ember would make the most awesomest couple EVER, though I'll be sorry to see the fighting go. :D I've just finished reading all of it, and I've gotta say, the whole war thing is written SO well, it still feels like they're in high school, but STILL feels like a real war. How do you do that? These are my favorite lines:
“I forget your aversion for the blazing glory that is truth, thou creature of darkness and dismal dampened depression.”
“Don’t even start. Don’t you know that kind of humor is the lowest form belonging to the most primitive branches of civilization? That is, little horny boys who think they have something to prove.”
“We really need to get over this penis envy of yours, Ember.”
The entire student population went silent as synchronized howls of outrage rang throughout the school at the same time. There was a brief pause as the shrieks faded away, before Brian O’Leigh murmured into the silence, “They’re awake.”
Let the games begin.
I especially loved the last part, because if that's not a sign of fate, I don't know what is. :D Update soon!
| Bluecoco100 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
My parents didn’t agree when I tried to do so in seventh grade, which is very hypocritical of them as they have always told me to follow my dreams. In not so many words, of course, but the sentiment is there.)
Wow that has to be the best damn line in this story. I laughed so hard I thought i was going to die for a second.
| readernotwriter1 chapter 19 . 6/12/2009
please update soon! I can't start reading this story until it's finished! I've been checking and checking for months! I'm so excited to read it but I'm afraid of that the suspense of not knowing the ending would kill me lol
| Perfectly Mythical chapter 19 . 6/11/2009
Wow, you are one hell of a writer.
This is amazing, you have to add.
| Stef chapter 19 . 4/29/2009
I read the whole thing in a span of hours. And... nothing you haven't heard before but I think this is brilliant. And it's been quite over a year now since you've last updated, but you can't honestly leave us all hanging here, could you? *puppy dog eyes*
I won't badger you for an update, but I really can't wait to read the rest of this entertaining tale you've spun. Take your time. I'll wait until hell freezes over. :D
| FerretsRevolution chapter 19 . 11/23/2008
This whole story is absolutely awespiring. I wish one day to be able to keep up a story like this. I love the plot of this whole story...it's very sci-fi, i admit, but it's awesome (and anyway, I LIKE sci-fi-ness). Great Job and update soon please!
| a lurker until today chapter 19 . 10/23/2008
you know, i bet you have to type in another summary/recap of the story in the next chapter. by the next time you update we will most probably forget even the names of the main characters.
and i'm not really pressuring you to update QUICKLY.
i love this story, yada yada... you know how great a writer you are without my help.
| Calenmiriel chapter 19 . 9/6/2008
I read this story quite a long time ago and really liked it, and just rediscovered it only to find you've put in like, one extra chapter! XD
I really like it, loved the awkward hug they shared last chapter, and am waiting for the moment where they finally realise their passion and have hot steaming sex ... okay, maybe they'll need to work a bit before they get to that. :)
But my god women, update! You can't leeavee us hanging like this. I'm whiny sometimes, and I think now it is showing .. update! I command you!
If not, I'll have to send a flaming piano your way.
| pseudonymlost chapter 19 . 8/23/2008
I've caught up
And it's pretty damn awesome
Don't quite know what to say at this moment, i'm basically on the verge of exhaustion due to the swelling of my occupied freetime caused by the looming acedemic year i'm embarking on this comeing tuesday.
So don't take this pointless review personally; i just can't remember what i wanted to put in this review.
Other then my utter enjoyment of you writings.
| pseudonymlost chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Ahem... let me just say...
You have seriously blown me away.
This is the first proof i've seen of a superior form of writing at work on this site. It's colourful, it's witty, it's attention grabbing. And i don't really know what to say other than that i would just like to thank you... which sounds really weird... but this is properly interesting. And you have a vocabulary? And the character's humour is unmistakeably intelligent?
And it's only the introduction...
| IHateMyLoveLife chapter 19 . 8/17/2008
This is a really ood story. It has taken me four flippin days to read this thing. Some parts became a little tedious. Like the last part in chapter 18. I love how Ember and Cale are at each others throats. They need to keep it to themselves a little more, but lately they've been learning. They are so many parts that I would like to quote as my favorite. But I can't it's just there are far to many to look for again. It's very tiring looking for the best parts.
The Side Characters
I like how we have finally gotten to see Angela and her personality. Just to get an insight on what she thinks is great. McSara is just barely crossing on the annoying side I do not know why that is. I guess because it's the annoying love sick puppy thing. I don't really care for those types. I love how make had blue hair and then he changed it to black and green. That is just sick! :) Daniel. I like Daniel because he's very mellow and just a down to earth boy. He's very protective of certain people. As seen through his point of view. It reminds me of my best friend and it's nice.
Ember and Cale
I like their disputes, scream fests, battles, and etc. I like how they are intelligent. It really shows when they are yelling at each other. You can see that they know what they're doing, most of the time. Cale has slowy become less vain. A little bit and he's stopped that feeling of everytime Ember touches him, he doesn't have to rub his arm raw. Ember is a bitch. Let's face it she thinks to highly of herself and needs to be taken down a couple more notches. She worked to get where she is as a leader, but the fact remains that she treats some people like dirt. Hopefully Cale and Ember can help each other become better people. Stupid snotty rich kids. At times, like in the last chapter, they become regular kids who are scared and finally show it.
I'd have to say this a well thought out story. It's very well written and keep it up. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
And that is my "whole damn shebang."- Couresty of Ember.
| Shannon chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
'Kay, so, I don't have an account on here, but I don't wanna be a Lurker. :)
I really like this. It's very original and the quality of your writing is fantastic. Imma keep reading! Yay! ]
| Heise chapter 12 . 7/29/2008
It just occured to me now I should tell you this before I reach your latest chapter (like I had originally intended), that Ember should crush on a boy.
An innocent and 100% foreign feeling and sensation that makes her confused as hell. And everyone else. e_e;
very pretty story, by the way. _
| unwashed heathen chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
Lurkeds are kewl. Sounds like a great story so far, very detailed and full of emotion-ish-ly things. Sorry, I'd say more but my sister is a computer hog and I am forever cursed to review from a lousy iTouch.