Reviews for To Fight or Fall
sincerely disregard chapter 2 . 5/31/2004
Hello. Wicked new story. Love the shift in mood from your other stories. This is probable only me but I don't quite like the feel of the title. Ember is not less emotional, she just seems to have different emotions. Forgive me if I do not part in jest but I always reveiw in the mood of the story. With that I am off.
Katsiebee chapter 2 . 5/28/2004
Well, I must say this is very interesting so far. Kinda think Ember needs an outburst though. She needs to get really pissed off and scare the crap out of Cale. That's only my opinion though. You always have very well written stories, so I'm not worried. can't wait to see how it turns out!
aiur chapter 2 . 5/28/2004
LOL this is hilarious! hehe i saw this on someone's fav list - can't remember who - but anyways, yeah. nice, nice writing. especially in your first chapter. that made me just start giggling like crazy. and when i start giggling, you know something's wrong. P keep up the great work! i wanna read more, more, MORE. this has so much potential ... i totally expected something different for a fic with this title. great spin-off. ooh, and could you check out something that i've written? unless you only read humour P update ASAP
Battle Raven chapter 2 . 5/24/2004
I like this. It's very different and origiinal. Whoot! Good job! Update NOW!
Boogalaga chapter 2 . 5/24/2004
A little extreem, but I love it. Good for her, but you might want to have her able to keep her cool better than your other characters. Also, it would be neat if a new stufent arrived. Then she/he could not pick sides. Then I could see what happens to non-side-picker-things, and they could have a war over her/him.
I eagerly await your next chapter.
who cares4 chapter 2 . 5/23/2004
love it! update soon.
Rose-Rayne chapter 2 . 5/22/2004
I like this story it's sounds very interesting. When you said that all the female population (except Ember, nice name, BTW) likes him are they all on his side with a few exceptions? Well i like it a lot. Update soon!
.~ Faith
Hikari Shan chapter 2 . 5/22/2004
Good start! I like your characters. The plot is good too!
NeWriter chapter 2 . 5/21/2004
This seems like a fairly good story although I'm not sure where it will lead. The way you manage to write in Ember's POV is very good indeed, and if you could add chapters that have Cale's POV it would be a great idea as well! Although some stories are better off with one POV... that depends on the plot and the style of writing of the author. Well, I hope you write another chapter soon! One suggestion, try to descibr more the background or the school in the future chapters, not just base everything on characters! Good luck and I'll be reading your next chapter:p
lady scribe of avandell chapter 2 . 5/21/2004
good chapter! i think ember's my favorite of your protagonists because she is much more mature than, say, spin. not so boy-crazy-ish. or something like that. anyways, i also like cale a lot (i think he and ash are my faves of your anti-heroes). it seems that this is the sort of tone you've been trying to switch "to become a suitable heroine" to. it works for this one, but i don't know that it works quite as well for heroine. don't get me wrong, i love them both, but i think heroine needs to stick with the light-hearted feel it had at the beginning. just my thoughts...take 'em or leave 'em. sere mi eru...lady scribe of avandell
Grace Hsia chapter 2 . 5/21/2004
Sorry I didn't send you a review earlier! Urgh...evil ppls who got there before me. Just kidding :P. I sincerely like this new way of writing a story. Oh, and I have another story in the works, I'm thinking of posting it up...except for the fact that I've already got other stuff. Can you believe it, this might actually be one of my mature stories, sad I'm GETTING OLD, because Mrs. Kincaid's like blah blah blah it's wonderful.
Either way, I love this story, how many times have I said that about your other stories? I seriously need to get my priorities straightened. Can we just say that this girl is way more cautious, and the guy character is way more colder, controlled, and sophisticated. YAY! Sorry, momentary loss of mentalness. _! Anyhows, I think the 4th chapter of B is due in about 4 days or so...I have so much homework, it's not even funny. I've got a test today (NO) and I have a speech to give, which will really suck because it has to be memorized. Somebody shoot me.
Crystal109 chapter 2 . 5/20/2004
Hehe. I love this Batle of the Sexes thing! It's really cool, and your names, as always, are wonderful. I would have liked to see some action first, but I guess you have to do something to build up the plot. Oh, and are you going to do one of those things where she gets a tutor in math who happens to be Cale because he's so great at math, etc etc? Oh well. I love the beginning, your guys are always really cool, and I'll stop talking soon, heh.
I like how Ember is all cold. She's trying to defy the stereotype. Props to her! Don't worry, you're doing fine at writing less emotional characters. I couldn't do that, that's for sure...
talichernin chapter 2 . 5/20/2004
Excellent change of pace. I love your new style. I mean, I really liked your other stories too, but I love what you're doing with this one, and it's only the second chapter! :D
fire byrd dancer chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
Hey I like it! Its a little diffedrsant and very new but I can't wait for the rest so I can tell you my full blown opinion!
Marenzi chapter 2 . 5/20/2004
~wailing miserably~ I WANT MORRE! I wanna see Ember kick Cale's butt! I wanna know what happens next! I wanna grow up and become richer than Bill Gates!
LOL... yes, I know I am behaving like a two-year-old. It's fun. Try it sometime. Oh, and I just have to point out that all your haracters fall in love with their worst enemy who is always hot. Nothing wrong with it, I personally love that plot to death, just pointing that out. ~cough~ And I s'pose I ought to apologize for the way this review started, but I won't. So there. ~cough~
I love the way that they're talking, I love the characters, and I love the plot. Kepp writin'!
"Eat sugar, get hyper, and write lots of random nonsense!"
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