Reviews for Coral Valley
coralvalley chapter 225 . 1/20/2017
Thanks everyone for the feedback. I've read all your wonderful comments and wanted to say thank you for all the tips, suggestions and support. For some reason when I've uploaded the chapters the formatting has taken out the breaks that I have had between the scenes. I don't know how or why that is happening, but it's an annoying feature that I can't seem to fix no matter how many times I've tried to work around coding. I tried to fix the chapters 139 thru 142 in formatting and I'm not sure if it worked or not. If anyone wants to give me any tips on that it would be much appreciated since the way I broke scenes up before with the symbols just stopped working. So I do apologize for that inconvenience. Thanks again everyone who took the time to read this story and has grown to like (or in some cases hate) the characters. All of your feedback has meant a lot. Truly!
kosocielo chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
I just finish your 1st chapter. I really like how you develop the characters' personality.
YanLing chapter 34 . 7/28/2008
I really enjoying reading your story. The sheer length is daunting... 3 million words is unbelievable. Your characters seem so alive and fascinating, with so much drama.

I do agree with another reviewer that section dividers could help the flow of the story and ease the transition from one character to another. Often, I was dumbfounded by the action of some character until I realize that you have started a new section.

Keep up with the great work and I hope I can muck my way through some more chapters before the end of the summer!
rushed88 chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
has potential but kind of confusing with all of the different characters. you should put dividers between all the different character situations in your chapters.
XkillerXburritosX chapter 45 . 5/2/2008
hey i just wanted to tell you how much i enjoy this story so far. i hope it continues for a long, long time, because i am completely hooked.

just so you're missing part of episode 45. right at the end. not too big of a deal, but this is a great story, and i'd love to read the rest of the chapter, if it's saved somewhere :)
crazychic7278 chapter 10 . 3/7/2008
after reading the first 10 chapters, i think avery might be a slut...and the story is strong and really really great...i like the jade and grady characters...
youpin chapter 219 . 12/4/2007
Amazing job and I hate Deidra for causing Carly to be needs to have his priorities straigtht.I hope Brant and Nick are there for the birth of their own children.I really thought that Shannon turned a corner but I guess not.I miss Heather and I like Kevin and Cori,they have nice seems to be a bit pathetic having Sarah fight his battles at least he stood up for himself at the end but Sarah is getting quite you have pictures for the characters by chance?
ANGEL992210 chapter 215 . 11/29/2007
You haven't really showed that much history of Valerie to make me hate her and why are all the guys sticking up for Blake like she is some goddess,when at the beginning she was a bitch and spoilt and still is quite a lot of the scenes with Grady and Avery were nice and shows how much history they have with one proposing to Angela is so can't some of the couples get together and fight the outside forces instead of them having to try to find themselves back to one another?
ANGEL992210 chapter 214 . 11/29/2007
I feel so sorry for Diane.I hope she tells Ben the truth before he finds out from someone and avoid the cliche of cheating and finding out from someone else instead of your partner.I was not expecting all that history between Avery and Grady but I love their chemistry when they aren't fighting and I hope they start figuring things out soon.
ANGEL992210 chapter 213 . 11/29/2007
This is so frustrating and now that Nick seems to be giving up on finding out about his past I hope Grady and Avery in their search for Jade go to the island.
youpin chapter 212 . 11/28/2007
Wonderful job and is there something in the water because nearly all of the women are turing up pregnant? I feel so sorry for Don and I hope Shannon wises are Dave and Carly going to take the test? I hate how Brant is excluding Avery,she is his wife and she should be able to support him,it is not like it is anything dangerous and that is why I love Russell and Avery because they worked together and supported each other.I am glad that Angela is trying to help but I hope they find out the truth about Nick or he gets his memories back.I hope Blake gets off her high horse soon.
youpin chapter 211 . 11/28/2007
Fabulous job and there are so many missed chances for everything to be revealed it is really like a soap I feel sorry for Valerie maybe I am bias because I don't like Blake but Valerie was there for Seth during the bad times,I hate that Seth seemed to have dismissed that so is a spoilt brat and I am not liking Sarah much now for standing up for Blake when she does not know the whole truth and Blake is calling people trash and slut just makes me hate her isn't all that great.
youpin chapter 210 . 11/28/2007
Another fantastic chapter.I hope someone mentions Avery's name,maybe that might trigger Nick's memory.
youpin chapter 209 . 11/27/2007
Amazing job and hope for reunion averted with Avery not going with Brant.I am so glad you updated but I am always nervous to read since I don't know what you will !
aRUShtotheheadlikebRainFReeeze chapter 208 . 11/27/2007
wow taking on this story is daunting! I remember reading the first couple chapters a long time ago! lets see if I can catch up!
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