Reviews for Coral Valley |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Of course I am still interested in this story! I've been wondering where you went. I also want to see what happens to all of the characters. You can't leave your audience hanging! Feebs |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still interested, and I hope you continue soon because I still adore this story, mainly because of Heather..so update girl, and holla me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just have to say that i have been reading your story ever since you first posted it. I took a break for a while from this site, but recently went back to this story. You are so very talented! I swear, you put so much thought and detail into this, its very impressive. Also, I must say I really love Russell and Avery. They rock! Im so happy Brent is out of the pic (though right now im at 69 of 185 chapters!) He is so manipulative. How can he say he loves avery, but have a three day sex-ridden affair with some strange girl? He is definitly not deserving of Avery. And I hate hate hate Blake. She is such a spoiled brat. So please continue, and I will do my best to try to read all of this. Maybe allow anon people to review, you might get a few more? So i will keep my fingers crossed about Russ and Avery as I read on. Wonderful and thanks! ~cfih |
![]() ![]() ![]() How perfectly OBVIOUS... who didn't know that Russ and Brant were going to do what they did? (saving the juicy bits in case someone is a review reader, like me, and doesn't want to know the punch ;o)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay? another update! finally man, think you would've have stopped. gj. update soon! oh btw, will this ever end! lol. yay |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY Grady and Jade! They’re so cute, I am happy they didn’t let that evil Thea get into the way! But poor Grady thinking it is all his fault. Its not I was DRD! Poor thing. And Brent is so cute I heart him. OH and Kenny and Caitlin :squeals: I love them that was too cute too cute. You know if Avery would just stick to one man I might like her, I also must scoff at ‘avery doesn’t respond well to force’ my FOOT that’s how Russ got her in bed with him. he is always forcing her and Brent too, I think she responds to it just fine… poor thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() :hits them both with the bar of soap: Russ-no bad I hate you Avery-no, BRENT BRENT BRENT don’t do this to him! thea… I still like her but Grady? :hits him with soap: JADE JADE JADE don’t do this to her! this of course was my thought BEFORE the drugging :beats thea: DRUGS ARE BED MKAY? And cameron you creepo! Could you be any more creepy? Well I guess you’d have to take lessons from kipp, who I can’t picture any other way besides a really short geeky (the bad kind) dude with ugly glasses and clothes that are too small for him… sorry for hurting you characters… x.x … :hits thea: … again sorry… date rape… its bad… …sorry |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO stay away from blake! :glares a kipp and cameron: and poor seth :huggles: oh man i really dont like russ and heather. and and im in love with brent! he is too cute, bad boy gone love sick puppy, you could just picture him with big teary eyes and pouted lips asking avery to dinner! it was too cute!"D8 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gee gah! I hate heather and russel! Why do people feel like they can control other people’s lives? And this stone fellow :glares at him: although I fricking love thea! I mean really she sounds awesome! I love brent… it’s the whole head over heels in love thing along with the bad boy image that is so fricking hot… love caitlin but if she wants this to go away she should DO SOMETHING gah it bugs me when people just cower :sigh: love jade but she’s to harsh on blake :huggles blake: and what the hell is seth’s job? |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO, Caitlin! poor thing! yay mindy and your timing, i was a little hoping we'd have a friendly ashford to play KISA but... and poor Blake :huggles: she is so cute with her 'I Am Woman Hear Me Roar' act as she proceeds to purr ") |
![]() ![]() ![]() bad seth he better not be using her! I love blake; they were so cute! *cuddles blake then glares at seth* hurt her and brent will be the least of your worries ”[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate Avery, I am sorry but I do. She really bothers me. and Blake she is cute but the whole not letting Seth’s sister see him was annoying really, why’d she be so mean about it? well I guess the whole Ashford thing… but still! I really liked her until then… but I still really like her… she is my favorite her and Caitlin when she trapped ken in the elevator? I giggled… also thought she was a little psycho but I giggled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh lord, how you can have so much happening in one ‘episode’ amazes me! You are my god. I had originally skipped over this story thinking there’d be old people and little kids (meh nothing wrong with little kids…) or something of the sort. And the fact that it is so long. then I realized my story is gonna be like this so I figured if mine is long and semi good chances are this is going to be good and lo and behold yours is BETTER then good! I am sadden that you have so little reviews what the hell is up with that? you are so under rated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've only read these two chapters but let me tell you that your lack of reviews does NOT IN ANY WAY indicate your level of work. Your writing style is excellent and the content extremely well organized; I can only imagine all the effort you've put into this story. I hope you finish it and that you continue writing for as long as you can. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() stone by name..stone by the heart...*sighs* OK. this stone thing is getting ugly. |