Reviews for More Than One Way To Cry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Deep. And It sucks that I can relate. NO, I don't cut myself...it's just sometimes, I feel like crying. And the only thing worse that not knowing why, is knowing that I wont. Great poem. Tastefully done. I can't wait for more writing from you. ~*CaramelCream*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I was listening to REALLY sad music when I read this - and it so just made it worse. I loved this...so much...Yep...sad...sad...so so sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg that is dark. i like it though. the rhythym is very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there any doubt of the talent in this poem? Powerful writing. I also like the format. To me, the italics are the girl's(?) thoughts. Haunting. I don't think I will forget this in a hurry. I'm adding it to my Favourite Stories list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could really... really ... relate to this one. I can't cry either ( but then again i'm a guy) but thats besides the point.. sometimes people just need to vent. All and all it was hauntingly sad but awsome all the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why hello! i've said it before, you have such an incredible talent, i can't get over it. please keep writing- never stop |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really don't understand cutting, but I like your poem. It's very beautiful even though the cutting bits had me wincing in imaginery pain. Yikes! ; ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow.. definately dark.. the format is awesome... amazing poem... very powerful... I can relate.. amazing poem |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this so much! i especially love the last two lines! excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gasp! This is an amazing, graphic, and expressive poem. I can even feel the pain you wish to release. Superb |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. I'm amazed how you captured all the emotions into this piece through excellent imagery. -C Skittlez |
![]() ![]() ![]() This flows nicely. Very well described, you can picture what your feeling/thinking very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVE the last line... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *adds story to favorites* WoNdErFuL! I really liked this- it was simply superb in so many ways... nice flow, great tone... Very sad- and a good way to wrap it up in the end! |