Reviews for Run Around In Circles
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
The last stanza is my favorite. It reflects me the most. I like it.
keep writing-
til-iburnout
o, i'm adding you to my fav authors and this is going to my fav. stories.
o and you asked if 'It Can't Be True, Can It?' and 'Her Eyes' are about the same person. Well to answer you 'Yes' they were but luckily for me the feelings have moved on from her and I've found someone who I love and not some crush.
CL Caudle chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Very nice. It perfectly describes the feeling you get when you realize that you have been running in circles, making the same mistakes over and over again. Keep writing!
the real faith chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
I like it thats really true!
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
wow. This is really beautifully written with the circles. I can relate too. BRILLIANT. Oh... you'll probably like "Rings Around the Lovers". It's a spin off of Ring Around the Rosy. Wonderful work _.
DXM Junkie chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
I like the last part of this poem the best. It was awsome!
evilcourtney chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
I enjoyed your poem. Nice use of rhyme and the circle theme. Also thanks for your review on my small essay 'Bush vs sexuality'. I appreciate your feedback and thank you for sharing your opinion. After all, that's what everything here is posted for.
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