Reviews for Why Won't I?
Poetic Nothing chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
To lazy to sign in :P I like this. I can totally relate and I love the format.
Thanks for all your reviews. They made me happy :) I'll be sure to review more of your work when I have more time. And yeah I listened to them at 11. I didn't quite UNDERSTAND their music until later.
Ah well, very good job.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
i like it... I can relate... great job!
rap-sucks chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
That's really good. I think it would be good as a song, too.
I'm a guy and I often feel the same way about lots of the girls I like.
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Nice rhythm & great POV! I like the repeating, and the short lines _ It's such a real poem and it reminds me of my good friend & this guy (jerk) she likes- super!