Reviews for The Cryptic Doll
Dead Anonymous chapter 13 . 5/2/2009
I don't know why you don't like this story. I found it entertaining and although Sade turning into a doll was such a let-down, I found it a happy ending. 'Cause, you know, he and Tri can be together FOREVER! Yay! XD
daydee chapter 13 . 4/12/2009
really interesting.

the story was not tht good, but the plot was really nice.

daydee
We Used To Wait chapter 13 . 3/10/2009
Ahh, no way. I kinda expected that sort of ending, having read your other stories. And there is nothing wrong with this story, I really don't see why you dislike it.

I loved it btw, and read it in one go. nice. hehe

thanks for leaving it up though! i lurved it.
We Used To Wait chapter 11 . 3/10/2009
Ehh, you SHOULDN't hate this story! Waii, makes me sad. You don't like your own work sometimes.

ok, enough of me bitching. sobby.
We Used To Wait chapter 9 . 3/9/2009
Aww, it's sad how you say you have no "feeling" for this story anymore. It's so beautiful, but I wanna feel like the author is there with me, you know?

But that's ok. hehe. um. I love your other stories too, though. yer one of my favourites.
We Used To Wait chapter 6 . 3/9/2009
i wonder what the little girl is thinking. she scares me too.
We Used To Wait chapter 4 . 3/9/2009
damnit i love it so much! so much so much so much much much much.
Lovedward48 chapter 13 . 11/20/2008
WTF? That's it? A bit rushed but ok! *shrug*

I like Trinity's personality! She's so shy and sensetive and all; it's cute!

I knew that in the end the guy would somehow turn bad! They never stay good! XD

I like the theme also! Dolls can be so creepy sometimes! LOL
Reminising Obsession chapter 13 . 10/12/2008
Alrighty,that was some bullshit.A great ending with a horrific all that Sade becomes a doll version of frikkin and Hyde .Youve got to be kidding me...and also what happento his sister?
Illegal0Immoral chapter 13 . 6/12/2008
I would have to agree with you on the fact that it isn't one of your greatest stories. But the plot was very unique and I did like it. It was just something about how you wrote it. Not quite sure what.

The whole idea was still great though, keep it up.

Tyer
Nightborn chapter 3 . 4/25/2008
Wow, this reminds me of Godchild. My FAVORITE manga. . . well, a certain chapter in it anyway. ha ha! Though it's not the same it just reminds me of it. The first thing that popped in my head. This is relly good, kudos to you!
Le Vance chapter 13 . 3/14/2008
Well... that was... uh... woah.

I didn't expect Sade to become a doll. Or become obsessive.

There were a few spelling mistakes, yeah, and uhh... that's pretty much it.

All in all, it was, as ussual, amazing.

With (a lot of) Love,
nothere3 chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
I like it. I hope it does get pretty eerie later, cause right now, it seems pretty tame. It's good anyway, though.
jonboblee chapter 13 . 5/24/2007
2 questions:

-can u make a sequel?

-will Sade and Trinity be able to have a child if they're porcelain doll?XD
xbluxmoonx chapter 13 . 5/9/2007
:-O o my goodness. that was just wow. you always leave me speechless. this was one heck of a great story. i don't like happy endings as much, but endigns like this just make me go :-O like up there. lol. but that means it was an awesome ending. what happened to sade's sister and tri's dog? it would be very interesting if you made a sequel. _ lol. but anyhoo, for about the hundredth time- great story!
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