|Reviews for Together Will We Break|
| The L1zard Queen chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
I'm sorry for offending you with my poem. I hoped I straightened things out with the reply I posted back. There was a bit of a misunderstanding, I believe.
And by the way, this poem was pretty good ._.
| Blissfully Unaware chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Wow, I'm a sucker for these kind of poems. I especially like the last two stanzas.
| destinee ariarti chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
to me, this sounds almost suicidal, though I'm not sure if that's how you intended it. it sounds like two people in love, but that have been hurt too much by the world they're living in, so they want to let go together. I don't know if I got the right message out of this, but still...great work