Reviews for Without You
MODERNDANCER chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
really good! There are SO many love poems out there that (dont take this the wrong way) this one probably won't stick in my mind for very long. That doesn't mean its not good though, just not outstandingly orgininal
Writer Saa chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
Simple, elegant, nice flow; good job.
destinee ariarti chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
..very nice. I can relate to this a lot..the hopelessness and all. good work.
kacie
AllThatMatters chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
We liked how it rhymed. We also liked the last 2 lines. Nice work! Please reveiw us back, thanks.
PS is trisket losing her touch?